class reflection

The articles from this week helped me to think about my own writing. After reading them, I've decided that I am not going to focus so much on proper, perfect grammar, punctuation, spelling, etc. (well, still spelling...I'm anal that way). Instead, I am going to focus more on my own voice, my own ideas, and make sure they shine throughout my paper. After tonight's class and getting to share some sentences/ideas from my rough rough draft with some of my classmates, I realized that my paper is really boring. I focused too much on actual data and facts rather than letting my own ideas, thoughts, feelings stand out and make the paper. With that being said, I'm more excited than I was to continue revising my paper.